Here is our 'sick' sentence for today.
There was a house on a snail. The snail was big and twisty. It floated in space. There were lots of stars.
And here is how I made it 'well' using different sentence starters. ( I decided to combine some sentences together and make one longer one)
Floating silently amongst the twinkling stars, the incredible house clinging to the snails back was a sight to see. Like a creature from deep in your wildest imagination, the snail was enormous and twisted into the most peculiar shape. Full of wonderment, I wish I was going with them.
I have used an 'ing' verb, a simile and a 'how'. What will you use?
Hello Room 8, this is my sick sentence.There was a small house on a old snail. The snail was giant like a giant rat and twisty like a cocoon. She floated into space, stars shining in her eyes. There were millions of shiny silver stars. Blog you later
ReplyDeleteHello Room 8 here is my sick sentence fix. There once lived an old, old snail an upon the snail stood a house that looked like it could only fit an ant. The snail shrivelled and twisted. It floated throughout the cold mist cave while slowly drifting up to look at the stars. Done! bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Room 8 here is my sick sentience.there was a small slimy snail with a strong house on its back. the snail was like a old wrinkly soc and the shell was twisted like a rotten butterfly wing. blog you later.
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