Here is your writing prompt for today.
Use the story starter to help start your own story or write your story all on your own.
Rewrite the 'sick sentences' to make them 'well' - remember to choose interesting words with lots of WOW nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs, and add lots of detail and description.
Create a picture to support your story - you can do it by hand or use an app such as Google Drawing or Piskel.
Make sure you post your work on your blog! Happy writing 👍
Good morning Room 8. Here is my 'well' sick sentence for today. I am looking forward to reading yours in the comments below or on your own learning blogs.
Wrapped tightly in glistening white armour, the astronaut was confident her body was protected from the harsh alien environment that surrounded her. Quietly groaning as another thick bead of sweat ran down her cheek, she turned up the air-conditioning gauge. Not that it helped. It was like walking on lava, the heat pushed up through her boots, straight into her bones. Full of amazement, she looked around as the thick red dust stretched as far as the eye could see. Just a few more difficult steps and she would be back, safe and sound on the Mars Explorer.
Hi. here is my sick sentence fix. The astronaut climbed into the suit as if it were the actual black and silver rocket. The suit was unbearable but warm at the same time. The astronaut stomped into the rocket soon came to a rest on a red and rocky planet called Mars. Well there you have it! Bye.
ReplyDeleteThanks Marshal. That is a much better sentence. Teacher Tip: Can you think of another way to start a each sentence rather than The astronaut each time? Maybe you could go: Stomping, the astronaut climbed into the rocket.... Blog you later.
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