Here is your writing prompt for today.
Use the story starter to help start your own story or write your story all on your own.
Rewrite the 'sick sentences' to make them 'well' - remember to choose interesting words with lots of WOW nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs, and add lots of detail and description.
Create a picture to support your story - you can do it by hand or use an app such as Google Drawing or Piskel.
Make sure you post your work on your blog! Happy writing 👍
Good morning Room 8. Here is my 'well' sick sentence. Thump, thump, thump! The whole runway vibrated as the feet of a thousand Jedi rushed in out of their spaceships. Suddenly, the was a sea of white helmets that all turned together, as if they were connected, towards the advancing Jedi army. Slowly they started marching towards the Jedi, in an endless stream from behind the hundreds of silver spaceships lining the runway.
ReplyDeleteHello Room 8, this is my sentence. The young Jedi landed on the old worn out runway.
ReplyDeleteMillions of stormtrooper's filled the room like installation filling the walls. There were tons of aircraft's on the run way and in the light blue sky. Blog you later
Hello Room 8, this is my semtence. The invasion had begun. Faced with row upon row of white-clad storm troopers, the Jedi knew they had to act quickly…..
ReplyDeleteAs the invasion began the Jedi had to quickly get back into the safety of the mother ship. They fought off the thousands of stormtroopers with cool coloured lightsabers. It looked like their master was Darth Vader da da daaaaaaaaaa. As they were fighting Luke Skywalker hit the mask of Darth Vader's face it was like a ninja slicing an apple in half Luke Skywalker found out who Darth Vader is. His dad. He suddenly stopped, Luke was shocked and horrified to know that his dad was the enemy Darth vader. Darth vader said to luke I’ve been trying to tell you for the past 100 years but I never got the chance too. I've been coming up with plans to kill the good side that you're on so I can take over the world. I hate you said Luke and he stabbed Darth Vader with his lightsaber. I don’t think you're going to take over the world now said Luke. The End