Here is your writing prompt for today.
Use the story starter to help start your own story or write your story all on your own.
Rewrite the 'sick sentences' to make them 'well' - remember to choose interesting words with lots of WOW nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs, and add lots of detail and description. Here are some sentence starters you could use.
As slow as a slug, the terrifying creature with ruby red eyes and fangs the size of daggers crawled through the putrid mud. Amazed by the sight of its silver scales reflected in my touch light, I stopped and stared. At the edge of the swamp, it slowed and looked directly at me, its large round eyes blinking. Suddenly, it licked its lips and I screamed, sprinting home as fast as my legs could carry me.
What sentence starters did I use? Simile, ed verb, where and adverb.
Hi Room 8 here is my fix. Slowly the slimy, freakish monster slivered out of the overgrown swamp and spotted a rat he approached it and wolfed it down. His big eye gleamed as he finished his food and his scales looked like they would shoot out and spike anyone. There it is! Bye!
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