Thursday, 28 May 2015

Descriptive sentences - One and Only Ivan.

Over the past term we read a book called the One and Only Ivan by Katherine Applegate. It has inspired our writing. Here are some of Miss Green's favourite sentences. 

Ivan has fur the color of a black car and his tammy is brown like chocolate. Yussra


I think that Ivan is soft on the inside and tough,strong and a hero on the outside. Vegas


His eyes are like dark night but you can see the trust and kindness. Tygan


When you look at him he looks angry but he is just bluffing, like all the apes. Thurston


How did Ivan end up in the zoo? It was all because of Ivan’s Art: He made a big poster for the bill-board. It said “home”. Saskia


Ivan has big fluffy fur, brown eyes that look like little puddles of melted chocolate and his arms are so long. Phoenix


HE LOOKS LIKE A BIG BLACK TORNADO COMING TOWARDS YOU. HIS EYES SHINE LIKE BLACK POOL BALLS AND HIS FUR IS COARSE LIKE A HORSES. Ossain


He's also a artist - ”weird gorilla”. Yeah, he eats the crayons too! Nate


Ivan watches a lot of tv. His favourite show was westerns about brave cowboys and pretty ladies. May


Ivan looks like the huge midnight coloured clouds you see in the storms. His back fur glistens in that much loved star, the sun. Maxine


Ivan is as black as the night with shiny, bright silver hairs on his back. That is why he is a silverback gorilla. Matteo



In America at the big top mall, Ivan the mighty silverback lived for 30 years. Mac takes care of 3 animals here, Stella, Ruby,and Ivan. Lucy

His is a black as liquorice and his eyes sparkle in the moonlight. He as tall as a giraffe and as wide as hippo. Jethro

He loves to paint with mud but Ivan paintings were hard to understand. Luckily one of his paintings were easy to understand and which led him to a new home (The Zoo). Jack

His eyes are like melted pools of chocolate. His fur is the colour of thunderclouds. Fiona


He looks like a black thunder cloud. And a artist. A boss of the herd. A terrible storm. A gorilla that never got to see the outside, Until now. Ethan

When Ivan is angry he gets very furious. He starts to look like a thundercloud that has long arm’s. Dwayne

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