Thursday, 17 March 2016

Poems with Ms Whysall

We have been writing poems with Ms Whysall. Here are some examples. For more poems please visit our individual bogs.


Garden to Table is great
chopping veggies  
carefully in the boiling hot kitchen
tugging on the weeds
planting some seeds gardening is awesome.
Finally the day is over we go to the kitchen to eat
Garden to Table is fun
I love it!
By Jordan



Warm blue water
backstroke and freestyle lengths
streamline kick
kids splashing and laughing
relaxing
By Benji
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3 comments:

  1. Sheryl Fletcher19 March 2016 at 14:07

    Hooray! Super to see super poem writing - Great read Benji and Jordan!
    I like this phrasing in your poems ... 'tugging at weeds' and 'streamline kick'.

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  2. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 10:13

    Hi room 21 you guys are the best class I ever been in.

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  3. Anonymous21 March 2016 at 10:13

    Hi room 21 you guys are the best class I ever been in.

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